Why say “He’s in a hurry” when we can show him tapping his
foot, gritting his teeth, or putting one foot in front of the other so fast he
trips on a jagged piece of concrete sidewalk? The best stories are a series of scenes strung together like
a moving picture we can create scene-by-scene using recall and emotions from
our own experiences. If your character is in love, remember a time when you were
in love. If your character is experiencing grief, remember a time when you were
experiencing grief in your own life and draw on the feelings that come to you.
If her sweetheart just said “yes” to her marriage proposal, show her laughing
or jumping up and down or buying flowers from a street vendor. Or maybe he’s
just been accepted to medical school. The medical school of his choice!
Clapping or singing or twirling around and around the room- any one of these
could be used as the basis for a scene.
Emotions are universal. You don’t have to have lost a family
member to show the despair of a woman
watching her husband die slowly of a terrible disease, or a father’s joy as he
looks at his newborn child. Just think of a time when you felt the required
emotion and then project that feeling in the form of a scene into your
character. For any of you who have taken drama, this might sound a lot like the
Stanislavski “system” of (actor) projection. That’s because in a way it is, and
in a way it isn’t.
When Stanislavski developed his method in 1906, he was
talking about live theater. There’s a big difference between live theater and
the pages of a story or a book. A book can become boring very quickly unless it
comes alive. So that’s the goal: making our words come alive. What do we see?
What do we hear, touch, taste and smell? Now let’s grab hold of that and show
it to our readers.
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